Phil Kaye

Phil Kaye is a famous poet and story writer I found a video online of one of his stories :
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EILQTDBqhPA&feature=youtu.be&list=PL3A3qMmk8p4LqIOQ04AjK60zM1X4XMx4t


  • I like the use of emphasis when he repeats his words.
  • The use of tone and volume makes you immersed into the story
  • I also like how he relates himself with the story it adds an extra layer to it

In  order to improve my story I need to think where and when can I add emphasis and i need to make my voice very animated in order for people to stay interested I also got to use pauses for efects and give a ranges of volume for suspense and tension.

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