What went well:
- My use of voice was well. It helped me become more like a character.
- I think the race scene went well and my use of facial expressions in slow motion, this made the kids laugh, which means we succeeded our purpose which is to entertain.
- My use of facial expressions was good, this made it clear what emotion I was putting on and how I feel about
- I think my interaction to other characters was good and was very simple this made the audience understand on what is going on
However to improve my grade I need to:
- My characterisation for the fox cub was bad, this was because I didn't move my whole body as a young fox cub, I found it difficult to find the contrast between these two aspects of my character. As I didn't do this properly I was unable to show a clear contrast between my two characters.
- I didn't maintain the stance for Bunce this made the audience confused if I was still Bunce or the Fox cub, I think my stance was too weird and I need to do more of a squatting motion; with my arms out to make my self look more masculine and smaller.
- I need to tone down Bunce as the kids found him more of a scary character when he suppose to be grumpy and he needs to be funny to watch. I can do this by altering my voice and facial expressions, for example instead of pulling a really "murderous" facial expression instead I should be more grumpy
- I need to focus more as this will improve my performnce and I will know what is happening at all times so I wont be late on going on stage and missing my cues, if I focus more I could also improvise in case their is a mistake and we need to cover it up.
- I need to maintain my character when the audience is not focusing on me. This will improve my performance and characterisation skills as I will wonder what my characters would do when they are not talking
What I would do to change the performance:
- I think we should of performed the show to an older audience as the kids were too young to interact with
- I think Bunce and Boggis should of interacted with the audience as they had no chances to interact with the kids
- I think the Fox family should of had a song to introduce themselves as the Farmers introduction was strong
- I think the Farmers should of done the final scene of just waiting as it could create a comic moment for the kids
This was our first ever unit for Double and I think it went really well. This show was funny and made has improved my ability to perform. On top of all of that we have created a strong bond within our group.
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